Yes!* I finally finished the third draft of the first chapter of PH. I’ll have to come back to it for another (fourth and final?) pass after I finish this third round of revision, but it’s starting to come together nicely at last.
The prologue is short and should certainly pique your interest, but it’s also different. Chapter 1 is where we get to know the main character Duncan – and I hope you find him as fascinating as I do – and through him the dystopian community he lives in. The work was to establish all that clearly, in an entertaining fashion, and without getting bogged down in extraneous details. (If you’ve read my work, you know how I feel about those.)
*And yes, I finished and filed my taxes too.