Thursday, June 23, 2016

2016 Week #25 Update

Where am I at?  I’m partway into chapter 3 on the rewrite of Watchbearers Book 4, and I’ve made it a little further (about 10% now?) into the first draft of Enemies of the Batsu (Miraibanashi Book 2) – and it’s from what I wrote for the latter that I take this week’s teaser sentence.  (Hint:  It’s a bit of a fake-out.)
    Holding a tray full of food in one hand, Mark started to take his screen from his shirt pocket with the other, but his fingers fumbled and sent it falling to the floor, shattering it into several pieces and silencing all conversation in the cafeteria.

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